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| Subject: Ophelia, By Rain. Fri Jun 18, 2010 7:35 pm | |
| Well, this is the story of (as the title says) Ophelia. She was my first RP character, and my fav... this is about what happened before the RP ´the werewolves are back in town´, at the HON forum. Anyway, I hope you like it and please leave some comment Chapter II walked through the streets of my beloved hometown, Edinburg. The sky was bright blue and the sun was beautiful, as always. I grabbed my dress, so that I wouldn’t step on it when I tried to cross the avenue. Without even looking from side to side and see if any car was coming, I rushed to cross it. Then I heard the honk of those expensive cars, and the screams of a man. -I’m really sorry- I rushed to say to the black hat man. -You should pay more attention- he said back. I nodded and finally crossed the avenue. I wasn’t too far away from my house… in other words, Mansion. I was certain that my mother and I didn’t need that enormous house, as it was only her and I. My father had passed away when I was little and my mother inherited his huge fortune. Anyway, I opened the back door and prepared my self for what my mother was going to say to me. -What took you so long? - She asked with a severe look on her face. -My friend lives far away- I explained as I took off my Hood. -I don’t like you meeting with that poor girl- she said as I brushed my hair.-what is her name, again? - She asked. -Maria- I murmured, trying not to shout at her. - And she is not poor mom… she is just Humble. She handed me the brush and indicated that my hair was a mess… again. -We got visitors- she said as her cheeks blushed- and it is very important that we make a good impression. -All you care about is money? - I asked, ashamed. My father had been the most humble man that I had ever meet, thought his great amount of money. -One day you will understand how important money is- she answered in a cutting way. I didn’t say anything back. My white day had suddenly turned black. Impotent, and with nothing left to say, I went to the living room were an old wealthy man and his son, maybe one or two years older than me, were waiting. I suddenly blushed when my eyes meet the blue sea-like eyes that the guy had. His father looked directly at my mother, but I didn’t care, I could not look away. -Mr. Philips,- my mother said with a coquette look on her tiny face.- This is my daughter, Ophelia. -Glad to meet you, Ophelia- Mr. Philips, said.- let me introduce you to my eldest son, Arthur Philips. I made a small reverence. Arthur stepped forward and grabbed my hand and kissed it sweetly. There wasn’t need to say anything. He just looked at me deeply in the eyes. I gave him my usual bright smile. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Mon Jun 21, 2010 11:35 am | |
| Chapter II Back in the kitchen, I leaned against the wall and waited for my mother’s explanation. When she came in, her cheeks were bright red and she had to clear her voice before being able to speak. -What do you think of Mr. Philips? - She finally asked. -He is fine, I guess- I answered, confused by her question.-why do you ask?- She laughed hysterically. Thing that was of my mother. -He asked me to marry him- she said directly. -What?!- I couldn’t help saying. -Exactly what you heard- she said as she brushed her hair. I frowned, and went closer to her. I looked at her directly in the eyes, thing that was a lack of respect, and asked: -What did you answered?- -I said yes, of course- my mother said with her mean smile. I sat on the chair. It was too much to understand. -Please tell me, at least, that you do love him. – I begged. She didn’t say anything. It wasn’t a surprise, but I hated when my mother behaved in this way. I sighed. -When was the last time you loved someone? - I asked in the same mean way she treated me. - I’m sure that you didn’t even love Dad. -I did love your father! – She said with the brush in one hand, and threading me with it. Yeah, sure I thought, sad. I walked to the stairs, and, without taking a second look at Arthur Philips, I went to my room. I heard three door knocks. -What do you want? - I asked, thinking that it was my mother. -I don’t know- A man’s voice answered. I looked through the little key slit. It was dark green. Arthur was wearing a Dark green coat… -Then, why are you here? - I asked. -I was sent here- He replied, simply. I leaned against the door. Then I reconsidered that, an awesomely lovely guy was outside. I turned and opened the door. -Come in, then- I murmured. I felt how the blood runner to my cheeks. He looked at me, surprised, but he walked in. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:25 pm | |
| That is amazing! OMIGOSH! Wow! I have read some really good books/stories... This one out-ranks them all! This was amazing!!! | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:21 pm | |
| Thanks! Im so happy someone liked it!!! And by the way, I didnt know you liked victoria frances, thats awesome! That pic is one of my favs haha | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Mon Jun 21, 2010 5:44 pm | |
| XD lolz, well I do! Hey... If it isn't too much to ask... Could you check out my story....? If you don't want to that okay... But, I really do like your story!!! | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:31 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Tue Jun 22, 2010 7:24 pm | |
| Chapter III I bit my lip as he entered. Another of the time rules was that guys weren’t allowed to enter to a lady’s bedroom. But he was worth all my mother’s shouts. I suddenly remembered that he, Arthur, was soon becoming my… brother. I literally wanted to kill myself. I didn’t even know him, but, guess what? I was madly in love with him. I looked at him, waiting for him to say something. But he seemed to be in the same problem that I was. -Your mother told you about the wedding, didn’t she? - He finally asked as he looked deeply in my eyes. I nodded and looked at him back. -If it helps…- he started do say. - If I had know you before, I would have tried to make my father regret… or something- he said with a hopefully half smile. -It does thanks- I said, politely. Somebody knocked the door. He went to the door, as a gentleman and looked outside. -Your father is calling you, Mr. Philips. - I heard the maid, saying. -Tell him, please, that I’m going. - Arthur answered. Then, he turned and went closer to me. Our noses almost touched. I saw the willing in his eyes. And in his mouth. I closed my eyes waiting… but nothing happened. He kissed my hand once more and left the room. I sat on the floor and sighed. Why is life always this hard? I thought.
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Wed Jun 23, 2010 8:30 pm | |
| Chapter VI Maria and I entered to a bar where we were supposed to meet our friends. I had told her all about my unlikely future brother, of witch I was madly in love. The place was full of men, and wasn’t at all a place for a rich young woman like me, thought this was the kind of life I liked. I cached a… red eyes man? Was that possible? He gave me a sexy smile, witch I didn’t answer. I looked the other way. The dress that I was wearing was pretty simple. It was one of Maria’s dresses, she had leaded it to me so that nobody that I could know recognizes me, but, luckily, it didn’t work. -Miss Ophelia?- Arthur’s voice asked. I suddenly blushed like a tomatoes. My friends laughed politely. -Yes?- I asked as I turned around.- Oh, hi Mr. Philips- I greeted him. -Please, just call me Arthur.- He said with a sweet smile.- I don’t think that this is a place for a young woman- he looked at my friends- or for four young women.- My friends laughed and I blushed even more. -Ophelia, can I talk you for a moment?- he asked as he looked at me deeply in the eyes. His beautiful blue eyes… -Yes, of course- I said as I went out of my dream. He took me to a place were nobody was. It was only him and me. I liked that. -What is it?- I asked politely. -I just wanted to say goodbye- He said. I couldn’t hide the tears that grew in my eyes. I bit my lip wishing that he wouldn’t notice. -Why?- I asked with a trembling voice. Gosh I’m so stupid I thought. He cleaned my cheeks and gave me a sweet kiss in each cheek. -Don’t cry- he asked- I will be back in a few months little sister- he said the last thing as a joke. I laughed. -When are you leaving?- I asked when my voice was better. -Tomorrow morning- he answered.- My dad has to do some things in France and as he has a bad health, and I’m a doctor, he asked me to join him. -Things for the wedding?- I asked. Arthur nodded. -He is selling all his things, as after the wedding we are moving into your house.- he explained. I opened my eyes more. He was going to live in my house! -You seem happy- he said with a huge smile. -I’m… kind of- I admitted.- how many months? -Two- he answered.- I got to go.- He said with a sad smile. I made a small reverence and he was gone. I went back with my friends. They saw I had been crying. -What happened?- they asked, worried about me. -he is leaving- I managed to say- tomorrow morning, for two months- I said. -Oh sweaty- Maria said. -But- I said now with a bright smile- guess what- -What?- another of my friends said. -He kissed both of my cheeks- They laughed. We had a nice afternoon after all, but I was too sad about Arthur leaving.
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:03 pm | |
| Chapter VII
I knew Arthur was leaving at 9, so I woke up erly and sighed as I looked for my favourite dress from my wardrobe. I finally got it, and got dressed quite quickly. The thing was, I almost knew Arthur, and I was afraid that he would be angry if I went there to say goodbye, I really needed to see him once more, and decide weather I liked him or not. I didn’t pay much attention to the house before running outside and telling the driver weather he could take me to the train station, fortunately, he say yes. I smiled and entered to the car. I heared the horses and looked at the window. I didn´t want to arrive later. -Quickly- I asked to the driver. -Should I be worried?- He replied, worried about me. I said no with my head and put my finger on my lip. -It’s a Secret- I explained, almost blushing. He understood what I was meaning, and looked at me with a reproaching face, however, he took me to where I had asked. It was a sunny day, I went off the car, thanked the driver and runned to where he was supposed to be. I finded him, with his father . I was hided behind a wall, waiting for the moment to call him. Finally his father entered the train and he stood outside arranging somethings. -Arthur!- I whispered loud enough that only he could listen to me. He looked around, sourprised. -Im right here- I said with a sweet smile. -Ophelia?- He asked, shoked. -No, a ghost- I jocked. He runned towards me and took my face into his hands. -Im glad you came- He said, just before he pressed his lips on mines, and kissed me passionately. He pushed me to the wall and kissed me more. -Im glad too- I said, breathless. He kissed me again and again, I couldn’t belive what was happening, I had never kissed nobody, but he seemed to have some experience. I kissed him back sweetly and totally happy that he liked me too, or maybe something more. That was when, when I finally kissed him back with the same passion, that the train caller asked everyone to go inside. -Come with me- he begged in between his kisses. -I cant- I managed to say.- When you come back, I promise you that we will be together – I replied. -I cant wait- He said and kissed me one last time. He kissed my cheek and my forehead before disappearing on the train´s smoke. I touched my lips and smiled brightly.
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:28 am | |
| Rain! Your story is absolutely amazing! And what show is your signature from? | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:45 pm | |
| Thanks kressie!! Its from the vampire diaries | |
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| Subject: Re: Ophelia, By Rain. Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:54 pm | |
| You are such a good writer, Rain! *hugs Rain* Ophelia is sooo good! | |
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